Hagrid posted a comment on Thursday 11th August 2011 9:52pm for An Enlightening Morning Conversation

And how were it that you never once mentioned "looking inter 'is Jade Green eyes"? or of 'im leanin' inter 'er hug and rememberin' her "vanilla an' Lily scent"? T'is most amazin' me friend, even without all that bunk about "the cold damp Tuesday out story begins,,," or whatever you 'ave single keyboard-edly (TM) proved a 4 Ga-Zillion galleon earnin' author wrong. I've been told I can't take no more Interestin' eggs or other critters from strangers but we've known each other fer years now. so I think yer might be safe in offerin' som'att...

Yeh keep writin' and I'll keep readin'
Hagrid

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Monday 8th August 2011 4:26pm for An Enlightening Morning Conversation

Are you playing the potion angle or simply them doing-what-seems-to-be-expected-of-them angle?

Ronin1959 posted a comment on Sunday 7th August 2011 5:31pm for An Enlightening Morning Conversation

I Do Like It. More?

greyskyparadise posted a comment on Saturday 6th August 2011 8:40pm for An Enlightening Morning Conversation

I really liked this. well done. I'm looking forward to reading more.

Thorfinna posted a comment on Saturday 6th August 2011 11:15am for An Enlightening Morning Conversation

That was cool. I loved seeing the progression of thought as they spoke with each other. I'd love to see a chapter 2 be something along the lines of Ginny & Ron's responses to them leaving.. most likely at full Weasley volume.

Michael10 posted a comment on Saturday 6th August 2011 7:34am for An Enlightening Morning Conversation

I prefer your usual style.
Keep up your usual work.

Zamia posted a comment on Saturday 6th August 2011 5:00am for An Enlightening Morning Conversation

Good to see they have both woken up to what is going on around them. Looking forward to the Weasley histrionics. Cheers.
Z

gadriam posted a comment on Saturday 6th August 2011 2:56am for An Enlightening Morning Conversation

Very nice indeed. A great closeness without constriction. A vague awareness in both of them of how things aren't going well but not yet seeing the big picture. I'd love to read about the trip and the Weasley reaction. Wouldn't a great Weasley Family Tantrum be a great way to make Harry lay down the law? Remind them that if he is the conquering hero they want him to be, then he's quite capable to make his own decisions. I've read about it having happened recently, but never as it happened.
I like your normal storytelling style, but this style worked very well. It does get more personal this way.
May Robert Lind in Kramfors bless your keyboard.

g

brad posted a comment on Friday 5th August 2011 10:14pm for An Enlightening Morning Conversation

You have a spelling error in the title - 'Convesations In the Aftermath'.

I always like references to Ginny's spiteful betrayal of Hermione's kissing Krum. A lot of fans forget that she did that; that the whole ugly horrible mess in Harry's sixth year - friends breaking apart, 'using' other students to foster jealousy, Hermione attacking Ron with canaries that drew blood, etc - was all started by Ginny betraying a confidence of Hermione's and informing on her to Ron.

The idea that Ginny *fabricated* the whole thing is new (well, it was the first time I read your story :-)). And makes Ginny even worse, of course. :-)

tsmuckitelly posted a comment on Friday 5th August 2011 9:51pm for An Enlightening Morning Conversation

Great, is it a part?