Eric_S posted a comment on Tuesday 9th August 2011 8:45am for Conversations On a Plane

Once again another great ficlet that shows why the Harry/Hermione ship (if only at "best friends" stage thousfar) is so more realistic. The author plums the depths of JKR's canon to show the reader numerous examples of why the books got it wrong (even though it's simplified YA reading in it's origin).
The new format of discussion... Liking it and it's a change of pace from the authors normal approach of writing.
So keep it up and looking forward to the rest of the story!

Machelle posted a comment on Monday 8th August 2011 6:56pm for Conversations On a Plane

I like this slow progression. It is much more natural and gives each of them a chance to grow and accept their feelings for each other. Now why do I have sneaky suspicion that Ginny made the love potion into a perfume tht was slow acting? Starting not to like these two Weasleys.

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Monday 8th August 2011 4:50pm for Conversations On a Plane

From the way it sounds, maybe Harry was being dosed with a low dosage of the potion, or Ginny was putting it into her perfume, or something else was being used on Harry. Looks like Harry and Hermione are going to be talking this out a lot until the inevitable kiss that changes things. I do like the fact that you are builiding it up instead of jumping right to it.

Kathleen posted a comment on Monday 8th August 2011 4:38pm for Conversations On a Plane

This is very intriguing! I'm enjoying watching the two of them realize they should be in love with each other...I love how you're doing this! And the conversations sound just like them!

DrT posted a comment on Monday 8th August 2011 4:46am for Conversations On a Plane

So far, at least, while it seems clear that while they should break things off with the Weasleys, they are in equal danger of talking themselves into a relationship they don't quite feel either

gadriam posted a comment on Monday 8th August 2011 12:40am for Conversations On a Plane

Brilliant, and also suitably clueless. The fact that they can't really hear what they themselves are saying is very credible and, with the benefit of a few decades' perspective, hilarious. While the dialogue-driven storytelling does work, i believe you're taking it a little bit too far. A few more reminders of the outside world wouldn't hurt, like an interrupting flight attendant, a screaming kid or the snoring businessman behind them that looks just like Vernon, except for the silly contented grin. Just a thought. I'm really looking forward to the next installment.
May Robert Lind in Kramfors bless your keyboard.

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Wolfric posted a comment on Sunday 7th August 2011 11:13pm for Conversations On a Plane

A couple of fine chap[ters. Your conversation format seems to be working. Thanks for writing. W.

Zamia posted a comment on Sunday 7th August 2011 10:23pm for Conversations On a Plane

Like a dog chasing it's tail. One of these days it will work out how to catch it. Cheers.
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