SteveC60xcjkas7rwlsg23 posted a comment on Wednesday 4th June 2014 6:02pm for Retrospective Conversations

Chem Prof,

As always I greatly enjoy your offering. You, sir, spin a wonderful yarn.

And, each and every time, I truly appreciate it!

Very best regards!

SteveC.

Feno3000 posted a comment on Friday 9th September 2011 1:16am for Retrospective Conversations

Awww heartwarming and fluffy... okay, the dialogue in the first half is sometimes a little bit stilted and the discussion after the hogwarts express goes on a little bit too long, as everybody reading this already knows the whole damned story, but all in all it's simply nice and sweet and just perfect HARMONY. I like it so!

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 28th August 2011 12:40pm for Retrospective Conversations

Nothing profound to say, just that I really enjoyed this series and the two companion stories tremendously.

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Monday 22nd August 2011 10:18am for Retrospective Conversations

Nice ending to your story and thanks for sharing!

SirKaid posted a comment on Sunday 14th August 2011 9:12am for Retrospective Conversations

I think this would have been better off ended with chapter three. This epilogue doesn't really add anything, since by the end of three we knew they were going to be together.

Maybe it's just me, but questions like "what are their kids names?" and "What do they do for a living?" never really matter to me when I'm reading this kind of romance story.

Also, the dialogue while they're in bed is a little stilted, mostly because they're summarizing.

NuitTombee posted a comment on Saturday 13th August 2011 9:24pm for Retrospective Conversations

Bravo good sir. I have thoroughly enjoyed the full read though, thank you for writing it.

-James

Chiyo posted a comment on Saturday 13th August 2011 8:27pm for Retrospective Conversations

Going to need dentures...

Still though you cranked this out in literally a week and thats without the narrative aspects which would have arguably made it go faster (possibly easier). All JKR needed to do was the same thing and she had years to figure out this is the way it should have ended.

Cannot express how much fun it is to have you on this site finally. Love reading through your work!

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Friday 12th August 2011 4:51pm for Retrospective Conversations

It was a fun, but short, ride. The story delivery was different and unique. This methid does not give much in the way of action, but does get more into the character inter dynamics.

lwj2 posted a comment on Friday 12th August 2011 4:06pm for Retrospective Conversations

I think you handled the change of style well, the story is enjoyable and doesn't come across as saccharine as you think it did.

I've been one of the folks who've (in re.: Ron/Hermione) wondered "Whatinell does she see in him, he's more of a brick than I am."

Thanks.

Crys posted a comment on Friday 12th August 2011 12:26pm for Retrospective Conversations

Mostly dialogue (which was the point of the experiment), but it still held together well.

Thanks for sharing.

DrT posted a comment on Friday 12th August 2011 6:40am for Retrospective Conversations

It's good to have a sugar rush in the morning! Thanks for posting this
"T"

Ladegard posted a comment on Friday 12th August 2011 5:17am for Retrospective Conversations

> Author Notes:
>
> This wraps up my experiment with this style of storytelling. I enjoyed
> it, and hope you readers did as well.

As a matter if fact, I did. Thank you.

00_Knight posted a comment on Friday 12th August 2011 2:24am for Retrospective Conversations

Good stuff as always!

Wolfric posted a comment on Friday 12th August 2011 2:03am for Retrospective Conversations

Congratulations on finishing your fine story. Thanks for writing. W.

Zamia posted a comment on Friday 12th August 2011 12:31am for Retrospective Conversations

Very different and exceedingly enjoyable. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
Z

mwinter posted a comment on Friday 12th August 2011 12:04am for Retrospective Conversations

Thank you, for your wonderful story. Awaiting til next time.