SteveC60xcjkas7rwlsg23 posted a comment on Wednesday 4th June 2014 6:02pm

Chem Prof,

As always I greatly enjoy your offering. You, sir, spin a wonderful yarn.

And, each and every time, I truly appreciate it!

Very best regards!

SteveC.

Feno3000 posted a comment on Friday 9th September 2011 1:16am

Awww heartwarming and fluffy... okay, the dialogue in the first half is sometimes a little bit stilted and the discussion after the hogwarts express goes on a little bit too long, as everybody reading this already knows the whole damned story, but all in all it's simply nice and sweet and just perfect HARMONY. I like it so!

Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Sunday 28th August 2011 12:40pm

Nothing profound to say, just that I really enjoyed this series and the two companion stories tremendously.

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Monday 22nd August 2011 10:18am

Nice ending to your story and thanks for sharing!

SirKaid posted a comment on Sunday 14th August 2011 9:12am

I think this would have been better off ended with chapter three. This epilogue doesn't really add anything, since by the end of three we knew they were going to be together.

Maybe it's just me, but questions like "what are their kids names?" and "What do they do for a living?" never really matter to me when I'm reading this kind of romance story.

Also, the dialogue while they're in bed is a little stilted, mostly because they're summarizing.

NuitTombee posted a comment on Saturday 13th August 2011 9:24pm

Bravo good sir. I have thoroughly enjoyed the full read though, thank you for writing it.

-James

Chiyo posted a comment on Saturday 13th August 2011 8:27pm

Going to need dentures...

Still though you cranked this out in literally a week and thats without the narrative aspects which would have arguably made it go faster (possibly easier). All JKR needed to do was the same thing and she had years to figure out this is the way it should have ended.

Cannot express how much fun it is to have you on this site finally. Love reading through your work!

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Friday 12th August 2011 4:51pm

It was a fun, but short, ride. The story delivery was different and unique. This methid does not give much in the way of action, but does get more into the character inter dynamics.

lwj2 posted a comment on Friday 12th August 2011 4:06pm

I think you handled the change of style well, the story is enjoyable and doesn't come across as saccharine as you think it did.

I've been one of the folks who've (in re.: Ron/Hermione) wondered "Whatinell does she see in him, he's more of a brick than I am."

Thanks.

Crys posted a comment on Friday 12th August 2011 12:26pm

Mostly dialogue (which was the point of the experiment), but it still held together well.

Thanks for sharing.

DrT posted a comment on Friday 12th August 2011 6:40am

It's good to have a sugar rush in the morning! Thanks for posting this
"T"

Ladegard posted a comment on Friday 12th August 2011 5:17am

> Author Notes:
>
> This wraps up my experiment with this style of storytelling. I enjoyed
> it, and hope you readers did as well.

As a matter if fact, I did. Thank you.

00_Knight posted a comment on Friday 12th August 2011 2:24am

Good stuff as always!

Wolfric posted a comment on Friday 12th August 2011 2:03am

Congratulations on finishing your fine story. Thanks for writing. W.

Zamia posted a comment on Friday 12th August 2011 12:31am

Very different and exceedingly enjoyable. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
Z

mwinter posted a comment on Friday 12th August 2011 12:04am

Thank you, for your wonderful story. Awaiting til next time.

Hagrid posted a comment on Thursday 11th August 2011 9:52pm

And how were it that you never once mentioned "looking inter 'is Jade Green eyes"? or of 'im leanin' inter 'er hug and rememberin' her "vanilla an' Lily scent"? T'is most amazin' me friend, even without all that bunk about "the cold damp Tuesday out story begins,,," or whatever you 'ave single keyboard-edly (TM) proved a 4 Ga-Zillion galleon earnin' author wrong. I've been told I can't take no more Interestin' eggs or other critters from strangers but we've known each other fer years now. so I think yer might be safe in offerin' som'att...

Yeh keep writin' and I'll keep readin'
Hagrid

Wolfric posted a comment on Thursday 11th August 2011 4:20am

Good chapter. Thanks for writing. W.

mwinter posted a comment on Thursday 11th August 2011 2:17am

Continuing to enjoy what you are posting. Awaiting more.

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Wednesday 10th August 2011 10:15am

None are so blind as those that fear to see what is before them. It seems that Harry and Hermione need more kicks in the pants before they get things worked out.