Riegert8 posted a comment on Sunday 15th May 2011 7:22pm for Part 6, Ending, and Beginning

Good chapter

Wolfric posted a comment on Sunday 15th May 2011 5:04pm for Part 6, Ending, and Beginning

I have been enjoying the story. Are we going to have a 19 years later letter?Thanks for writing. W.

marcelhm posted a comment on Sunday 15th May 2011 12:10pm for Part 6, Ending, and Beginning

well I'm no good at writing well thought out critiques so I'll just give you my impressions.

Obvious part first, you started out being quite detailed in your letters since they where so frequent while the last half year was only 2 which didn't make the story too comprehensive. (luckily I have a big imagination :P)

On the other hand especially for a first try I can do nothing else but compliment you. especially the start was a great read, and I loved the short letters like for instance letter 14 which added more emotion than some of the really long ones funnily enough :)

take care

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 14th May 2011 4:18pm for Part 6, Ending, and Beginning

This is a good time for Hermione to come clean to Ginny. I saw the handwriting on the was back when Harry told Ginny how much he needed Hermione because she was so smart and helped so much in the search for the horcruxes. I look forward to more of this story. pms