Infin1x posted a comment on Saturday 15th March 2014 6:16pm

This is one of the most believable and amazing AUs I've ever read. It's amazing not because of big changes just the one small change that cascades into something better than the canon epilogue (I actually feel like Harry had a happy life here.) It's completely believable that JK actually had that line in mnd when coming up with Dumbledore's grand plan.

I want to write more but it isn't coming out right so just thank you for writing this.

Wolfric posted a comment on Saturday 15th March 2014 5:52pm

Very touching. Thanks for writing. W.

Dervish posted a comment on Saturday 15th March 2014 4:39pm

Very well done

MSgt SilverDollar posted a comment on Saturday 15th March 2014 2:09pm

Great little one shot. It was nice that Harry ended up with Hermione and there was no real bashing. While I do like bashing stories this was a great break from them. I hope to see this out on fanfiction.net!!!

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Saturday 15th March 2014 11:27am

Oh, yes, a much better, and more plausible, ending. I do like their final choice of epitaph as it undoubtedly covers their relationship perfectly. It would be rather interesting to see the changes this story caused ripple through time. Methinks the Epilogue would be rather different and Draco wouldn't be near as well off.

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Saturday 15th March 2014 11:05am

"And the greatest of these is hop!" - Arnold J. Rimmer.