Hermione's Plan :: Life Goes On

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Aurilia posted a comment on Monday 16th April 2012 9:14pm for Life Goes On

In the sentence "Deciding he needed to relax, and wanting to sooth the tension in his neck, back, shoulder, arm, and leg muscles, Hermione gently removed his cloak, the dragonhide armor, and his underwear and led him into the hot tub," I believe the word you meant to use was 'soothe', not 'sooth'. 'Sooth' is a rather Shakesperian synonym for 'truth' whereas 'soothe' means to ease or calm. Otherwise, my only real complaint is that the story was set up with one particular expectation and thus far it has yet to conform to those expectations - the first chapter indicates that this is going to be a nicely twined story of both adventure and romance, but as of this point, all we've seen is the romance. Hopefully, the attack on the Burrow will help speed along the adventure side of things.

00_Knight posted a comment on Wednesday 1st June 2011 10:40am for Life Goes On

Meh.... You call that a cliffhanger!

Anyway another great chapter, thus far continuing the excellent work previously displayed in your other stories.

Shall be interesting to see what Ginny will try in her conversation with Harry, will she try the "slut tactic" or will she try the "I need some loving to help my mental state" routine. Or maybe she'll act mature and ask what went wrong with their relationship.

Until next time...

Wolfric posted a comment on Wednesday 1st June 2011 3:05am for Life Goes On

Fine chapter. Thanks for writing. W.