Amamama posted a comment on Saturday 25th January 2020 4:05pm

Thank you! This has been such an enjoyable read, I’ve loved all the little details, the growing connections and developing relationship, the psychological insights and the care for the characters. ❤️

Digging through old fanfics is indeed an interesting pastime, not everything passes the test of time, this does. 🌹

margareth posted a comment on Wednesday 11th July 2018 6:08pm

Not sure if it would actually work but I was wondering if the quidditch game would have been possible if Hermione obliviated each Harry and Ron except the last ones to play after the game so they wouldn't remember it and therefore not be able to try to change anything. Ron's right, it would be a fun game.

Anyway I've been loving the story so far and just had to ask if you think my idea would have worked.

gara5289 posted a comment on Saturday 1st December 2012 9:57pm

So few stories write Ron maturely or have him act competently. It's nice to see it written well.

Aurilia posted a comment on Monday 16th April 2012 9:14pm

In the sentence "Deciding he needed to relax, and wanting to sooth the tension in his neck, back, shoulder, arm, and leg muscles, Hermione gently removed his cloak, the dragonhide armor, and his underwear and led him into the hot tub," I believe the word you meant to use was 'soothe', not 'sooth'. 'Sooth' is a rather Shakesperian synonym for 'truth' whereas 'soothe' means to ease or calm. Otherwise, my only real complaint is that the story was set up with one particular expectation and thus far it has yet to conform to those expectations - the first chapter indicates that this is going to be a nicely twined story of both adventure and romance, but as of this point, all we've seen is the romance. Hopefully, the attack on the Burrow will help speed along the adventure side of things.

Hawklan posted a comment on Monday 2nd January 2012 2:17pm

a really good Epilogue to a really fun to read story. The only thing bad about is that it is over now :)

Hawklan posted a comment on Friday 30th December 2011 2:31pm

ok the rush to Hogsmeade was stupid and could have been handled far better
nice surprise for Voldy that Hermione fought the Imperio and the shots that followed... :)
Good they arrived in time for Ginny

Hawklan posted a comment on Friday 30th December 2011 2:31pm

wow awesome battle and nice fight with the dragon...rofl about the Star Was and trek jokes

Hawklan posted a comment on Friday 30th December 2011 2:30pm

nice part with the Dementors
and the one with Ginny and Ron before the wedding was good as well
good weddings and good you hadn't Molly throw a fit :)

Hawklan posted a comment on Friday 30th December 2011 2:29pm

nice Halloween this time around and now to see what Croaker wants.

Hawklan posted a comment on Friday 30th December 2011 2:29pm

nice birthday for Hermione, luckily without bad surprises as on Harry's

Hawklan posted a comment on Thursday 29th December 2011 11:53pm

nice recounting...and wow for what the twins did in the alley :)

also nice opening feast and I hope you show us a Muggle Studies lesson :)

Hawklan posted a comment on Thursday 29th December 2011 11:53pm

rofl nice how they baffled Croaker
ouch with the thing about Lady Black and Potter, just good Hermione got over it and talked wit harry.

Hawklan posted a comment on Thursday 29th December 2011 11:52pm

*Chapter 16

the poor elf, but good the Horcrux is gone


Nice gift from Hermione to Harry birthday and a not so nice one from Voldie

*Chapter 17

would have been fun to apparate dressed like that to her parents :)
and good you didn't kill them off

*Chapter 18

good training of Ron and fun scene with the duel and swimming :)

*Chapter 19

good talk with McG about changing things in the school

good first meeting with the DA members

*Chapter 20

nice how the training thing went and also a good idea to include the Grangers and other ppl.

Hawklan posted a comment on Wednesday 28th December 2011 2:50pm

*Chapter 11

I hope Charley will pull trough. One dead is hard enough and I hope Arthy will get better as well

*Chapter 12

i like the way how Harry/Hermione and Bill/Fleur get along.

*Chapter 13

i really like the scene with Bill and Fleur and nice they have a time for the wedding

*Chapter 14

ouch harsh things Snape spilled out in his questioning
nice thing about Bill knowing how to deal with a Horcrux

*Chapter 15

rofl...Ron the prime game in the hunt at Hogwarts :)
and nice reaction all in all

Hawklan posted a comment on Wednesday 28th December 2011 2:49pm

* Chapter 6

ahh nice fluffy chapter :)

*Chapter 7

really cheesy again, but fun to read :)

*Chapter 8

nice bit with learning from the Maya and a good conclusion to the year and yes I think Ginny won't
take that to well :)

*Chapter 9

good Fleur and Hermione got along so well and I can't wait for the Ginny explosion when she finds out :)

*Chapter 10

congrats to Remus and Tonks... I hope they have more time here than in canon
a shame Charley is probably dead and possibly both parents as well...but rushing of like that into an attack? kinda stupid.

Hawklan posted a comment on Tuesday 27th December 2011 3:09pm

*Chapter 2

no surprise the Dursley's weren't there and nice how Ron is acting here

*Chapter 3

rofl...Hermione a closet nudist??......fun

*Chapter 4, Initial Preparations*

nice idea with Mexico and I hope Hermione's hopes in regards to Harry will come true.

*Chapter 5

nice start of the trip and evil end :)

fyrecat posted a comment on Monday 7th November 2011 3:59pm

Hmmmm. Me Likey. What a very practical Hermoinie-ish way to approach the problem as she sees it. Very nice!

Lira posted a comment on Tuesday 1st November 2011 6:19am

Quite an interesting story. I really, really like the way you had Ron okay with Harry-Hermione. I absolutely hate that nearly all Harmony-stories have so much Ron-bashing in them, it's as if all those Harmonians don't quite believe in their ship and thus have to do the worst to get Ron out of the picture!

kyoshi posted a comment on Wednesday 24th August 2011 8:14am

I think adding another girl to the story would make for a better story. As Harry and Hermione would have to find the right one and it would show how Hermione would react and how the other women would.

kyoshi posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd August 2011 3:38pm

Does anybody wonder why Fleur who is the bride and comes from a very important and distinguished family get married in England and the marriage is in one of the poorest houses in magical England. That never made any sense! The Weasleys are as poor as church mice and usually the wedding is at the bride's home.