Notebooks and Letters :: A Plethora of Potters

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gadriam posted a comment on Friday 28th September 2012 12:18pm for A Plethora of Potters

Thanks.

Now, i do find it rather ridiculous to use polyjuice of all things this way. So they want to kill Harry. This means that they will fire on all possible Harrys, practically guaranteeing casualties. If Harry and Hermione had been polyjuiced to, oh Neville and Ginny, they would have denied the DE's their targets and added to the confusion about who to aim for. This way, they provided a shooting gallery. The other way, they had a chance to get away without any shots fired at all.

You made great use of the polyjuice concept though, and the phony Moody, and his unmasking, was masterfully portrayed.

Thanks.

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Patches posted a comment on Friday 28th September 2012 12:35am for A Plethora of Potters

This is really good. I really like the changes you made. Harry discovering that Mad was a death eater polyjuiced again was great. I'm glad Harry took over and made changes that helped everyone escape reatively unharmed. Harry discovered that he either missed hitting the spell Voldemort shot at him or Voldemort had a different wand. I glad Harry was able to take Voldemort's wand. That was great. Hermione was smart to put a sticking charm on her so she couldn't fall off the broom. That made Harry's job that much easier. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms