Notebooks and Letters :: Betrayal and Heartbreak

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GBTtown posted a comment on Sunday 30th September 2012 10:40pm for Betrayal and Heartbreak

I think that my dislike for Dumbledore finally peaked when he insisted on showing Harry "home movies" of Voldemort rather than train him to fight. It was at this point in reading canon that I figured out that Dumbledore was not training Harry on how to win but, on how to die. At this point my interest in JKR's remaining books became strictly academic. I wanted to finish the story but really had no expectation of them turning out the way "I" thought they should.

Patches posted a comment on Wednesday 19th September 2012 2:13pm for Betrayal and Heartbreak

This is an excellent chapter. You managed to include a lot of details from canon while also introducing Harry and Hermione to the periles of a long distance relationship. Cho in this story is a lot more forward and devious than what I've seen before. I'm glad Harry reacted the way he did. He found out he isn't as strong as he would like to be when faced with a naked girl that obviously wants him. At least he did push her away so he could run out of the room. He felt awful because he had been drawn to Cho at all. That is why he felt like he had cheated on Hermione. I'm glad they got together so quickly with Emma's help. She was right to chastise Hermione for he jumping to conclusions. Very well done. Thanks for writing. pms