This is really good. I really like the changes you made to why and who went to the Dept. of Mysteries. Susan is an excellent addition. Having Ginny try to alert the order is better than depending
on Snape. I wish Harry had tried his mirror again. He might have gotten Sirius if he had. I look forward to more of this story. pms
Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 11th September 2012 11:43pm for End of Term, OWLs, and ...