Notebooks and Letters :: Promising Leads / Troublesome Issues

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socar37 posted a comment on Thursday 27th September 2012 5:53am for Promising Leads / Troublesome Issues

Regarding AN2: Actually, I took it to mean that leaving Ron in charge of food supplies guaranteed that there wouldn't be enough. I picture him being like most procrastinators, putting the job off since he can always do it later, until suddenly its too late.

gadriam posted a comment on Thursday 27th September 2012 2:50am for Promising Leads / Troublesome Issues

Very nice. Yes, this does put some much needed flesh on the obliviation bones. This way, it's credible. I also like that Mad-Eye reacted to Harry's assertiveness, not just took it in stride. He shouldn't be able to shrug off such a change. I also enjoy that Snape is communicating. He really should. I'm staying tuned.=)

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Patches posted a comment on Thursday 27th September 2012 1:31am for Promising Leads / Troublesome Issues

There are a lot of improvments here. I like the fact that Harry discovered who RAB is quite early. Snape leaving a message in Sirius room was a good idea. He knew Harry would read any letters that involved Sirius and his parents. I think it is a good idea that Harry and Hermione are keeping things from Moody. He is too old to change his ways. Following a child as the leader just doesn't fit his profile in my book. I'm glad Hermione and her parents took Harry to the Dursley's. At least that is one less thing for the Dursleys to complain about. 2 weeks was more than long enough for Harry to have to spend with them. I'm sure that it will take someone else to figure out the "Deathly Hallows". Hermione is too set in some beliefs to see them as possibly being real. I'm glad Hermione's parents are in contact with Rose. It is sad to think such intelligent people would hold a grudge against a problem that the solution used probably saved their lives. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. pms