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Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 4th September 2012 11:56pm for Unwelcome Visitors and Change of Plans

This is a really great story. I love the changes you have made. I especially like the "slip" Harry made in his letter to Hermione about considering Ron's feelings. Very subtle! I look forward to more of this story. I like the "cliffie" Hermione gave Rose. That was excellent

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HexyMama posted a comment on Tuesday 4th September 2012 4:48pm for Unwelcome Visitors and Change of Plans

Great story!! I like your Hermione more then JK's!

I can't wait for the next update

AbnormalPanda_242 posted a comment on Tuesday 4th September 2012 4:12am for Unwelcome Visitors and Change of Plans

Oh wait, take back the last. I skipped a chapter! That explains it.

:P

AbnormalPanda_242 posted a comment on Tuesday 4th September 2012 4:10am for Unwelcome Visitors and Change of Plans

Hey there!

I really like this story - I think that the plot concept is very good, and while the whole start-up situation could have been very tenuous, you've made it work. I also very much approve of the changes that you've made to the plot. While Hermione's decision was a little harsh on Ron (here's to hoping that he nor his mother get hold of that "least suited" line) It's one that I've always thought was the thing taht shold have been done. While Hermione always took her responsibilities very seriously, and I can kind of see some of Dumbledore's reasoning behind not choosing Harry (not that I agree) - surely any of the other Gryffindor Boys would have been better than Ron? Neville, who's quite rule-abiding; Dean, who doesn't seem to get in much trouble; Seamus, who seems to be friends with most people. Let's face it - Ron's a little lazy.

That said, are there going to be any explainations as to why Hermione never ended up at Grimmauld place this time round - or how she ended up visiting Harry?

Jason Karr posted a comment on Monday 3rd September 2012 8:41pm for Unwelcome Visitors and Change of Plans

good chapter. looking forward to how the year goes from there.