JerJer62002 posted a comment on Thursday 13th December 2018 9:18pm for EG Chapter 20c - All Together Now

Absolutely Amazing!!! Brought me close to tears many will the finale actually doing it. Finominal!!! Though still find myself to like many parts of Hermonies Plan better this was still amazingly! Personally having a hard time moving on from this story after reading over the course of a week I don't know what to do with myself! Amazing keep written man!

peskylilcritter posted a comment on Friday 23rd March 2012 5:52pm for EG Chapter 20c - All Together Now

This is a wondeful story!

I especially love the way you treated Ginny. Far too many writers portray her as a whiny child or a manipulative bitch (pardon the language) or something equally inaccurate, just because they don't like the character or Jo Rowling's epilogue. So thank you very much for that.

I'm also a great fan of all three of your endings. I absolutely cannot decide on a favourite.

At the risk of repeating myself, I want to thank you for the care you've shown all of your characters (even those who died) and the great number of scenarios I had never considered before.

Thanks, Annabeth

lwj2 posted a comment on Monday 30th May 2011 7:39pm for EG Chapter 20c - All Together Now

Excellent -- and any of the three endings would have worked for me.

Thanks!

Andrius posted a comment on Sunday 8th May 2011 1:43am for EG Chapter 20c - All Together Now

Harem ending is, obviously, the best! :)

It was an enjoyable story, although, in all honesty, I thought it could have used more action and mystery. Then again, you made it very clear a the beginning that it would focus on the relationships, so I can't complain.

crystalscan posted a comment on Friday 6th May 2011 5:35pm for EG Chapter 20c - All Together Now

I very much enjoyed your story. I had never heard of it, or you, but when you got on this site, I knew you had to be good. I will say that I normally prefer action centric stories, and the focus on relationships is something that is normally a bit boring for me. In this case, however, I enjoyed your characterisations so much that I read it all in about two days.

Most relationship centric stories seem to revolve around one character acting stupid, the the other overreacting, them getting back together, and then one of them acting stupid... I enjoyed seeing the evolution of the relationship very much.

I very much enjoyed your definition of "love," and agree that the majority of fanfiction gets it very wrong.

The only critique I had was that there was to little.... magic? action? discovery? A large part of my enjoyment of Harry Potter comes form the world he is in. Defining "magic," and what makes it tick is something that most of my favorite fanfics do.

All in all, great story, 5/5. I hope you keep writing, and continue to enjoy your work.

Meg posted a comment on Saturday 30th April 2011 11:30am for EG Chapter 20c - All Together Now

Good to see you here!

I uploaded the epub, and just finished re-reading. Just as fun as remembered!

I'm looking forward to you loading more of your stories here, as I love having them on my iPhone. :-)

Meg

KenF posted a comment on Monday 25th April 2011 8:37am for EG Chapter 20c - All Together Now

I can't believe how long it has been since I read this story. I remembered bits and pieces, but not where they came from.

Like most long running writers, it is interestng to see how your writing has evolved.

KenF

naraic posted a comment on Friday 22nd April 2011 4:42pm for EG Chapter 20c - All Together Now

Heya, believe it or not I had just finished a reread of your works over on FFN (as in all of them over a month) and I just want to say I enjoyed it and congratulations on getting an account here