Sinfield4 posted a comment on Saturday 3rd March 2018 10:11am

Nicely done

gara5289 posted a comment on Friday 23rd November 2012 2:20pm

I really like how you wrote about Hugo and Lily. Clever and classy leaving it like that. Great one-shot though and i also like how you didn't make Ron and Ginny bad people, it'd be to easy to do that.

Cassandra30 posted a comment on Tuesday 26th June 2012 1:52pm

Excellent! I like this story!

Gioia posted a comment on Saturday 23rd June 2012 10:15pm

Absolutely WONDERFUL.

Wolfric posted a comment on Sunday 30th October 2011 2:45am

Great story. Thanks for writing. W.

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Friday 14th October 2011 11:49am

I think you should finnish the story, this is a great idea.

Thanks for writing
MPF

Tenchifew posted a comment on Wednesday 12th October 2011 8:23am

Very nice story!
It shows how much can be changed by one singular decision...
Thank you for writing.

noylj posted a comment on Tuesday 11th October 2011 8:21am

Is that it?
More, please.

Geneva posted a comment on Sunday 9th October 2011 8:33pm

I so need more of this!

Hagrid posted a comment on Saturday 8th October 2011 11:38am

Well finally, some one did som'att about that, that thing out the end of DH, and you've done it quite well. Anyone with any sense at all could tell them two were meant fer each other. now I've seen enough Weasley's pass thru this school to know the signs, an' only Ron left me with a feeling that som'att were missing. Seemed like a drive, a sense of self, a goal if you would, were missing from that boy. As me old dad used ter say "that boys got a lot of quit in him"

Feno3000 posted a comment on Friday 7th October 2011 4:04pm

The ultimate exposition and dismantling of JKR's epilogal delusions. Marvelous analysis and wonderfully worded and fleshed out from your basic thoughts.

BG2Hell posted a comment on Friday 7th October 2011 3:30pm

That bit about cousins seems to be rather far fetched. Not only is it perfectly legal to marry your cousin in most parts of the world, it even seems to be fairly common in the magical world.
In Denmark - my home country - it is legal and I am myself the result of such a marriage. My grandfathers were brothers. Very few countries have any legal problems with that.

Bob Officer posted a comment on Thursday 6th October 2011 10:57pm

This is a nice story. I can imagine just how the story might progress. I enjoy other people's stories, and especially yours. While I tried to write a few stories of my own, I always end up hitting a wall where the store seems to dead end eventually. It allows me to appreciate your even more.

jesterod posted a comment on Thursday 6th October 2011 10:26pm

i very much like i know its just a one shot but it could also be the beginning of a great story

Wolff posted a comment on Thursday 6th October 2011 9:17pm

If they love each other, and they're not pushing for children, what's the harm? So what if they're close family members... finding someone to love, and who loves you, is special enough that it shouldn't be shat on, if proper precautions are taken.

00_Knight posted a comment on Thursday 6th October 2011 5:27am

Good story, is there going to be more?

If not, waiting till your next post!

Sakya posted a comment on Thursday 6th October 2011 12:18am

I loved it.

And thank you, It was just what I needed tonight.

gadriam posted a comment on Thursday 6th October 2011 12:03am

Thanks.
There's a gazillion redo fics out there, and few of them are very good. This stands nicely as a one-shot. I wouldnt't mind seeing the rest of the story though. The way you would write it, i can't imagine it going sour. You have a great grasp of , well, people. I would like to see what happens next. On the other hand, i don't need to. The start, your lovely disassembly of the epilogue was truly brilliant. The "kids" were brilliant. The merger of reality, real people, real development, real emotion and the infamous crapilogue was masterfully done. Thanks.

g