Content Harry Potter

Reviews

  • Previous
  • Next

noylj posted a comment on Monday 3rd December 2012 10:07pm for Flight

The shopping trip is needed. I don't understand how Harry made it through 7 years with NOBODY ever giving him some clothes. Of course, the whole series of books became totally stupid by book 6...

Patches posted a comment on Monday 3rd December 2012 12:21am for Flight

This is an excellent change for the OOTP. I really like the fact that Harry doesn't trust Dumbledore and he leaves the country with the Grangers. That is excellent. I really liked the fact that Hermione's Parents are so understanding about the new relationship betweem Harry and Hermione. It is excellent that the Delacoures are welcoming them to their phone. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. pms

Puck1 posted a comment on Sunday 2nd December 2012 9:09pm for Flight

Nice job on this. I can't wait to see the MoM and Dumbledore's reactions to Harry's flying the coop.

Lordamnesia posted a comment on Sunday 2nd December 2012 3:24pm for Flight

Very, very well done! An easy escape (because the order is THAT incompetent in cannon), and willing help from the Grangers, and you have a great start! Keep up the good work!

Mathew McCrillis posted a comment on Sunday 2nd December 2012 6:34am for Flight

A nice alternate chapter starting point, I like the focus of the story being a little wider than some of the others that I've perused.

Cheers!

preier posted a comment on Sunday 2nd December 2012 1:37am for Flight

quite good to see a sirius who actually does something for his godson

as for the shopping trip, as you said, it's necessary. at most, in this situation, you could have slid over it while mentionning it happened. and at least you spared us the 'harry buys half the inventory of the diagon alley shops' cliche ^^

thank you for sharing your tales

lwj2 posted a comment on Saturday 1st December 2012 9:40pm for Flight

Neat premise, I'm looking forward to see where you go with it.

Thanks for writing and sharing this.

Jason Karr posted a comment on Saturday 1st December 2012 8:40pm for Flight

this is a good story looking to the next chapter.