ProfessorBinns posted a comment on Tuesday 4th December 2012 1:48am for Turnabout
Very enjoyable so far. I am hoping to see what conflicts do emerge, now that you have Harry off on a firmer footing than in canon.
Patches posted a comment on Monday 3rd December 2012 1:49am for Turnabout
This is excellent. I love the fact that Sirius was at the Delacour's before Harry and the Grangers even arrived. Of course Harry would question if Sirius was safe there but the Delacour's were very
much in Harry camp and that included his godfather. I love the way they manipulated the press and the public in England. They really rocked the world and got Fudge out of office in record time. I
like how Hermione and Sirius explained why Molly annoyed Sirius so much. A child was stucture and love in their life. That is Molly's regular way of doing things. It doesn't work so well with
adults. I like Sirius attitude to being upfront with Harry and the other teens. Molly wants to protect them too much and hide bad things from them. The talk with Amelia was great. She is really on
their side now for sure. Making the statement that Sirius is innocent and now Pettigrew is taking Sirius place on the wanted list is more than fantastic. I really like the changes you have made.
Your comments about JKR's discrepancies are valid and I really enjoy reading them and making the comparisons myself. Thank for writing. I look forward to more of this story. pms