Puck1 posted a comment on Sunday 2nd December 2012 9:09pm

Nice job on this. I can't wait to see the MoM and Dumbledore's reactions to Harry's flying the coop.

Lordamnesia posted a comment on Sunday 2nd December 2012 3:24pm

Very, very well done! An easy escape (because the order is THAT incompetent in cannon), and willing help from the Grangers, and you have a great start! Keep up the good work!

Mathew McCrillis posted a comment on Sunday 2nd December 2012 6:34am

A nice alternate chapter starting point, I like the focus of the story being a little wider than some of the others that I've perused.

Cheers!

preier posted a comment on Sunday 2nd December 2012 1:37am

quite good to see a sirius who actually does something for his godson

as for the shopping trip, as you said, it's necessary. at most, in this situation, you could have slid over it while mentionning it happened. and at least you spared us the 'harry buys half the inventory of the diagon alley shops' cliche ^^

thank you for sharing your tales

lwj2 posted a comment on Saturday 1st December 2012 9:40pm

Neat premise, I'm looking forward to see where you go with it.

Thanks for writing and sharing this.

Jason Karr posted a comment on Saturday 1st December 2012 8:40pm

this is a good story looking to the next chapter.