Content Harry Potter

Reviews

  • Previous
  • Next

LordLexx posted a comment on Monday 6th January 2020 4:41pm for The Yule Ball

Romilda Vane is a 2nd year at this point in the story and wouldn't be able to go.

namelis posted a comment on Saturday 22nd December 2012 10:34pm for The Yule Ball

i would not use the movie as a refrence to make a comparison to the book because this movie is the point where the movies and the books diverge to the point where they were only veguely the same story

that movie implyed buxbutons as an all girl school and dermstang as an all boys school when all 3 schools were co ed in the book both boys and girls were spicificaly mentioned in each school

then the movie got to the first task and they had the dragon act like it could care less about its eggs and as soon as it saw harry it broke its chains and chased him when in the book the dragon was not even chained down there was no need cause it cared about nothing more then protecting its eggs harry had to taunt it to get it to chase him

the movie also implyed that the boys dress robes were all black and they looked like robes atempting to copy a what we know as formalwhere when the books had dress robes in many diffrent colors and that book spcifcaly mentions how little wizards understand of muggle fasion that there attempts to dress as a muggle are interprited as anything they can find in a muggle store is ok so its obvious that the 2 types of formalwhere are not going to even be similar

at that point i almost got up and walked out of the theator the only thing that stoped me was that i was in the middle of the row and i did not want to diturbe all the outher people that were watching the movie but as far as im concerned that movie was just some bad fanfiction with a huge budget and i did not even bother to watch the later movies

i can understand not beaing able to imagin what dress robes or really any robes look like in there world because all the discriptions are verry vegue but what ever any way i like your story but it just that movie just pissed me off and i descided that after the 3rd movie the books and the movie are telling compleatly diffrent storys

noylj posted a comment on Monday 3rd December 2012 2:31am for The Yule Ball

I could see them in "Pride and Prejudice" type robe-gowns.

Of course, the movies were totally noncanonical about clothing and almost everything else.

Patches posted a comment on Monday 26th November 2012 5:48am for The Yule Ball

This is a great alternative to the Yule Ball. I like the way Ginny kept Harry from dwelling on the negative about this ball. The dancing lessons that Hermione gave them worked out well. I'm glad Harry took Ginny. He handled it well but he just isn't ready for a girl friend right now. Thanks for writing. I'm really enjoying this story. pms

William Martin posted a comment on Saturday 24th November 2012 7:32pm for The Yule Ball

Thanks for an interesting story. I'm glad to see Harry showing an interest in Hermione.

He was a real prat toward her in the books.

I know they say opposites attract, but, I can't see Harry marrying Ginny or Hermione marrying Ron.

For that matter I can’t see Luna marrying Ron either.

I can see Ron marrying Lavander or Romilda or even both.

Anyway, thanks for the excellent beginning. Keep up the good work.

Hytekrednek posted a comment on Saturday 24th November 2012 9:10am for The Yule Ball

I have to say that I truly enjoy reading your stories. I believe that I read this on FF.net already. I just wanted to let you know that you are one of my favorite fan fiction authors.

bob26 posted a comment on Friday 23rd November 2012 4:12pm for The Yule Ball

Sorry I have never bought the ideal of Hermione going to the ball with Victor and you did nothing to change that view. I can see her asking Harry as a friend or date that will lead to much more and married. Also I don't see Harry asking Ginny at all to much a fan girl in his oppion wich he hates. Also I never agreed with Harry friendship with Ron, he just shows everything Harry hates like being a bily to Hermione and low oppion of anything muggle.

Also most poeple like Ron chacator need a lot longer to grow up then just a few months or years most never do that I have the misfouture to know or meet.

Chi Vayne posted a comment on Friday 23rd November 2012 3:12pm for The Yule Ball

The only thing I would add is that it just felt to me like Hermione was pushing Ginny on Harry at the beginning, like she didn't even consider his suggestion and ran roughshod over his concern.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Friday 23rd November 2012 1:57pm for The Yule Ball

A well written alternative to canon.

Jason Karr posted a comment on Friday 23rd November 2012 1:55pm for The Yule Ball

ron needs to be knocked around a bit .

lwj2 posted a comment on Friday 23rd November 2012 12:59pm for The Yule Ball

I like it, it will be interesting to see where you go with it.

Thanks for writing and sharing this.

gara5289 posted a comment on Friday 23rd November 2012 12:52pm for The Yule Ball

I think you might be giving Harry slightly to much credit with his ability to handle Ginny but considering this is fanfiction thats just my opinion. DOesn't change the fact that it was a great chapter.

alec_potter posted a comment on Friday 23rd November 2012 12:39pm for The Yule Ball

Nice chapter...well plotted.. thou it would have been interesting to see Ron's reaction to Harry calling Hermione his best friend..